Destiny

This is dedicated to the other half 
of that eternal ring, 
The compliment to Adam known as 
Eve, 
A masterpiece painted for me; 
If there should ever come a day where she 
questions the authenticity of our test of time, 
I’ll illustrate our history book to her; 
Not wanting to jinx the future, but rather show 
her, that just like the predetermined 
moves in chess, 
God played it, so that our hearts could 
meet at checkmate; 
For just the knowledge that Monday leads 
into Tuesday, 
Our first moment together doesn’t define a 
coincidence, 
But yet a scattered puzzle, that when 
put together, 
Made us fit perfectly; 
I felt that invisible rope connecting us, and 
as it decreased in size, 
Our conversation began, and from there
the story told itself; 
Stories like ours are the cornerstone 
of answers people debate all their lives for; 
Since the day I knew I had the ability to 
care outside of myself, 
I craved for it; 
I envisioned us resembling two unfamiliar images 
in another memorable portrait, 
Then years later, having a proper introduction 
in another memorable portrait, 
Where we would discuss of our two circles meeting 
previously, 
And bring to life the world “fate”; 
With 23 chapters already behind me, 
I hope history writes another hundred years for 
us, in plural skies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/8/2014 9:11:00 PM
I could only hope and pray, one day, these beautiful thoughts would be said to me...even though i would surely cry. I am in love with the Adam & Eve theme, yet i do feel i am ready to venture there with my words yet. ;) Someday. Thank you for sharing, hit my heart!
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Melisa Karpinske
Date: 10/8/2014 9:32:00 PM
I meant do not. Sorry my phone and the operator do not get along.
Date: 8/6/2014 11:59:00 AM
Really nice!
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Date: 7/4/2014 5:48:00 PM
Very nice piece defines hope and fate.
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/5/2014 3:03:00 PM
Thank you Cecilia. Appreciate the love.
Date: 2/6/2014 7:47:00 PM
I have no Eve in my life at the moment but I am a big believer in destiny , So I embrace the future and whatever it holds for me . I thoroughly enjoyed this poem . Thank you
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 2/6/2014 8:23:00 PM
Thanks Darren. Appreciate the love.
Date: 11/17/2013 6:16:00 PM
i hope that destiny is as beautiful for you are your words as they fall across the page...lovely write... that end line speaks volumes! :)
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 11/17/2013 7:08:00 PM
Thanks Sandra.
Date: 9/21/2013 10:25:00 PM
this is a very deep and powerful piece of writing. Full of devotion and love. l great job
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 9/21/2013 11:01:00 PM
Thanks Robin. Appreciate it!
Date: 9/19/2013 11:59:00 AM
Nice poem, a great tribute to that special someone -good job! MC
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 9/19/2013 12:26:00 PM
Thanks MC. Appreciate it.
Date: 7/19/2013 8:19:00 PM
This... I LOVE... Nice Work :D
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/19/2013 9:10:00 PM
Thanks Lala. Appreciate the love.
Date: 7/4/2013 10:25:00 AM
You get a 7 on this one. I do think that history will write another hundred years. hanks for sharing this with us...... Lucilla
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/4/2013 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Lucilla. Appreciate the love.
Date: 7/3/2013 9:46:00 PM
Another hundrrd years for us, in plural skies.....blows my mind! Jiril! Good work! Jimbo
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 7/3/2013 10:00:00 PM
Thanks James, appreciate the love.
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