Destiny

DESTINY   

     She failed to fly on fairy wings demonstrated by fate whether early or late.
   Forgotten past not to unfold, present just rolled beyond control.
   Untold future above prediction, what was awaiting ahead!
    Her confidence coiled. Crushed competence left relic radiation of dismay. 
 
  Let it be, whatever would be. Fate curved and craved path of lamented life.
     She tried her most but in vain and pain and again not to venture.
    She surrendered to unknown ruthless fate letting ambition sinking in vortex.
    Inevitable fate pulling or pushing with merciless thrust to bury in abyss.                       

  06/26/18  
                                                              Second Place

  'Eight lines on fate, when you wonder, it is too late' Contest by Silent One

  
   'BRIAN'S SELECT F'     Contest by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 11:35 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done! Hugs Eve
Dutta Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 12:40 AM
Thanks Eve for your continuous support. Love
Gauthier Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Well done, Anisha. Congrats on your podium finish.
Dutta Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 12:39 AM
Thanks Line. Love.
Gentry Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 12:36 AM
Congratulations on your win. A story of fate well told. Well done!
Dutta Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 11:37 AM
Thanks Susan n Love.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 12:24 AM
Congratulation on your win. "Inevitable fate pulling or pushing with merciless thrust to bury in abyss"... great line.
Dutta Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Thanks Subimal for visit n appreciation.
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:42 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dutta Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Thanks Sunshine for your visit n comments.
One Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Great take on the contest Anisha.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Dutta Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Thanks S.O. for your appreciation.
Ajmal Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 11:05 AM
A really beautiful written poem showing the cruelty of life, that how sometimes life is totally against us and how sometimes we are failed so many times that we just don't have the strength to move on, I wish you best of luck in the contest
Man Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 10:07 AM
This is good.. glad you put it into a contest!
Dutta Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Thanks Lyric
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