Destiny

DESTINY She failed to fly on fairy wings demonstrated by fate whether early or late. Forgotten past not to unfold, present just rolled beyond control. Untold future above prediction, what was awaiting ahead! Her confidence coiled. Crushed competence left relic radiation of dismay. Let it be, whatever would be. Fate curved and craved path of lamented life. She tried her most but in vain and pain and again not to venture. She surrendered to unknown ruthless fate letting ambition sinking in vortex. Inevitable fate pulling or pushing with merciless thrust to bury in abyss. 06/26/18 Second Place 'Eight lines on fate, when you wonder, it is too late' Contest by Silent One 'BRIAN'S SELECT F' Contest by Brian Strand

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/21/2018 11:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well done! Hugs Eve

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/22/2018 12:40:00 AM

Thanks Eve for your continuous support. Love

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/21/2018 9:55:00 PM

Well done, Anisha. Congrats on your podium finish.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/22/2018 12:39:00 AM

Thanks Line. Love.

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/21/2018 12:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A story of fate well told. Well done!

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/21/2018 11:37:00 AM

Thanks Susan n Love.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 7/20/2018 12:24:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. "Inevitable fate pulling or pushing with merciless thrust to bury in abyss"... great line.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/21/2018 11:38:00 AM

Thanks Subimal for visit n appreciation.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/19/2018 7:42:00 AM

- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/19/2018 10:34:00 AM

Thanks Sunshine for your visit n comments.

Silent One

Date: 7/19/2018 7:33:00 AM

Great take on the contest Anisha.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/19/2018 10:35:00 AM

Thanks S.O. for your appreciation.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/28/2018 11:05:00 AM

A really beautiful written poem showing the cruelty of life, that how sometimes life is totally against us and how sometimes we are failed so many times that we just don't have the strength to move on, I wish you best of luck in the contest

Lyric Man

Date: 6/27/2018 10:07:00 AM

This is good.. glad you put it into a contest!

Anisha Dutta
Date: 6/27/2018 9:58:00 PM

Thanks Lyric