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Destination Unknown

jet vapours long trail
arc across late afternoon sky
plane just a speck now

imaginationplacestravelhaiku

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 22, 2011 at 2:24 PM

thankxx Carol .. always luv your warm and welcome comments ... glad u enjoyed my write on the value of poetry luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

March 16, 2011 at 9:47 AM

Thought-provoking, Carol. When we look up and see those jets overhead, we often wonder where they're bound. Really enjoyed the imagery in this haiku. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 15, 2011 at 6:02 PM

Grand imagery and visually energetic Carol.. wonderful words depicting the elements surrounding the plane.. enjoyed and thankxx for your wonderful comment on my Easter contest entry luv..