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Destination Unknown

jet vapours long trail arc across late afternoon sky plane just a speck now

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/22/2011 2:24:00 PM
thankxx Carol .. always luv your warm and welcome comments ... glad u enjoyed my write on the value of poetry luv..
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Date: 3/16/2011 9:47:00 AM
Thought-provoking, Carol. When we look up and see those jets overhead, we often wonder where they're bound. Really enjoyed the imagery in this haiku. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/15/2011 6:02:00 PM
Grand imagery and visually energetic Carol.. wonderful words depicting the elements surrounding the plane.. enjoyed and thankxx for your wonderful comment on my Easter contest entry luv..
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Date: 3/15/2011 1:37:00 PM
Nice observation on the jet's flight, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2011 10:27:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this today Carol. Have a wonderful week filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2011 3:29:00 PM
ooh,I LIKE this. VERY nice, Carol!!
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