Destination -- Destiny

My God Son, Harry Feddermann entwines with his Forever
On the Anniversary of my Everlasting Day, forgotten, Never
Back to Seattle, I lived there for a year and a half; eons ago
The Wedding has nothing to do with the Love that I now know

The second half of this “Viva Vacation”  will mend my broken Heart
Barbara Jean Gorlick; entwines my Soul, as God’s perfect form of art 
Her eyes are so enticing,  beckoning; to join her in an Everlasting Life
When I get to San Francisco : I’ll ask Barbara : Please be my Wife



Inspired By "Sweetheart" Linda-Marie's Contest " Viva Vacation "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations HG on your win in the contest "Viva Vacation" sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Chachere Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 9:42 PM
this is so sweet.(: may you both live in a gentle love together. so cute.i love you always, have a wonderful night my spirit brother. -Always&Forever your sister spirit Lynn
Sweetheart Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 5:33 PM
Congrats HG on your HM in my Viva Vacation contest.. lovely write .. appreciate your support...luv.. Linda-Marie..
A   Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 4:19 AM
Good morning, enjoying my self by reading many wonderful writes, nicely done, enjoyed the spirit pined in this read,..p.d.
A  Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 7:17 PM
A GOOD WRITE, ENJOYED AND GOOD LUCK ON THE CONTEST
Devonshire Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 6:13 AM
Wow, HG!! Has Barbara seen this yet? I would love to see the two of you set out on a happy life. Your "viva vacation" is full of promise! I bet Linda-Marie will love this one too. Love and best wishes always, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 7:39 PM
very nice, good luck in the contest, and thank you ever so much for your most encouraging and kind comments
Sweetheart Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 7:02 PM
SOUP MAIL...luv..
Mehta Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 7:02 PM
All the best in the contetst.
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