Syam Madappattu Poet Free verse

Destination

Still you are
                         with your lamp of trust
                         searching the gold coin.
                         lost in darkness
                         swept by coincidence

                         still you are
                         with your mast of hope
                         sailing to the polestar
                         lost in darkness
                         swept by coincidence

                         however
                         anchor is waiting
                         here or there

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Bl Devnath January 12, 2014 at 9:09 AM Your optimistic angle is nice. I am too until I am lost in hope. Beautiful poem enjoyed. Loved always, my friend, bl

Robin Davis January 11, 2014 at 8:04 AM Syam This is a very deep and insightful write. Makes the reader do some thinking about the meaning of these words. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Karma poem.

Daver Austin January 5, 2014 at 2:50 PM "Coincidence"seems to be the way with me, Syam. Not quite ready to drop anchor just yet, even though the polestar, so I am told, is within reach. Love, daver

Denise Retro December 12, 2013 at 8:43 AM Thats a lovely poem letting go...