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Piloted masses Invasive sharks in the sky Cloaked ebony Inspired by Raul's Mareno's "Tattered wings contest"!

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Date: 4/10/2010 1:07:00 PM
Laura, i love the third line cloaked ebony >> James
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Date: 4/9/2010 5:58:00 PM
Gosh I wish I could have seen that photo. You wrote such a lovely haiku from it. I have not been online for the past 7-8 weeks so I missed it. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 4/9/2010 11:54:00 AM
Excellent haiku, Laura! Every line is both haunting and stunning! Especially..."invasive sharks in the sky"...quite chilling and innovative! Wishing you an abundance of success with your upcoming poetry book. Peace and hugs from your BKLYN buddy, Johnny
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Date: 4/8/2010 9:14:00 PM
Fine images
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Date: 4/8/2010 7:58:00 PM
Terrific Laura and good luck in Raul's contest... a great description of this awesome photo... an awesome write..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/8/2010 4:56:00 PM
Vivid images convey your thoughts in this poem. What an interesting perception in the second line. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Date: 4/8/2010 4:54:00 PM
I like this unusual take on the contest, Laura!! Well done!!
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Date: 4/8/2010 3:52:00 PM
great job!! good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/8/2010 3:45:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this this great Haiku, Laura....Thank you, Laura...Peace, Audrey
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Date: 4/8/2010 3:02:00 PM
good one!
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Date: 4/8/2010 2:51:00 PM
great Haiku original..indeed..Charma
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