Destination

Piloted masses 
Invasive sharks in the sky
Cloaked ebony 





Inspired by Raul's Mareno's "Tattered wings contest"!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 1:07 PM
Laura, i love the third line cloaked ebony >> James
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 5:58 PM
Gosh I wish I could have seen that photo. You wrote such a lovely haiku from it. I have not been online for the past 7-8 weeks so I missed it. Blessings, Connie
Heck Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 11:54 AM
Excellent haiku, Laura! Every line is both haunting and stunning! Especially..."invasive sharks in the sky"...quite chilling and innovative! Wishing you an abundance of success with your upcoming poetry book. Peace and hugs from your BKLYN buddy, Johnny
Mehta Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 9:14 PM
Fine images
Sweetheart Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 7:58 PM
Terrific Laura and good luck in Raul's contest... a great description of this awesome photo... an awesome write..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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April 8, 2010 at 4:56 PM
Vivid images convey your thoughts in this poem. What an interesting perception in the second line. Good luck in the contest. Karen
Richards Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 4:54 PM
I like this unusual take on the contest, Laura!! Well done!!
Culverhouse Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 3:52 PM
great job!! good luck in the contest.
Haick Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 3:45 PM
Good luck in the contest with this this great Haiku, Laura....Thank you, Laura...Peace, Audrey
A   Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 3:02 PM
good one!
Chircop Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 2:51 PM
great Haiku original..indeed..Charma
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