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Dessert Invitational

by the moonlight i take long sips of its celestial white silk, and follow the cookie path to heaven, or to hell, so delicious, filled with lemon cream, and under the lemonade sun, i sit upon the donut of chocolate with sprinkles, a smile steeped with jelly and cream, a beacon of my childhood dream, but i must consider the day and night where lies the gravitational pull back to earth and the crunching of salad cures the fingers and eyes, from mistaken delights. the orange sun squeezes out its c, and the yogurt moon spoons a much happier grin, yet there’s no sin in an occasional DESSERT INVITATIONAL win 2/23/2018

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Date: 2/25/2018 9:46:00 PM
So clever, I was darned engrossed, loved every second. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2018 6:22:00 AM
Thanks for the “poetry hugs” ...<3 Kim
Date: 2/24/2018 3:08:00 PM
This wonderful poem got me craving something sweet and delectable. I will have to settle for blueberries with a dollop of yogurt! A delight in itself! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2018 3:40:00 PM
You are good!
Date: 2/23/2018 11:33:00 PM
making me hungry for sweets.. they are always around :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2018 3:39:00 PM
I know! Why is that!
Date: 2/23/2018 9:38:00 AM
Very descriptive work. If for a contest, reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2018 3:38:00 PM
Not for a contest. Thank you, Sara!
Date: 2/23/2018 7:21:00 AM
Now you've made me hungry Kim, love how you've done this, I'd take a bet and day you have a sweet tooth. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2018 8:10:00 AM
I do and have to watch my “cookie monster” tendency!

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