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Dessert Girl

Once a "good girl" who gorged after dinner

on desserts, Sue lost weight and got thinner.

Guys are asking her out

and without any doubt,

Sue's become THEIR dessert - luscious sinner!


Aug. 29, 2019

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CayCay Godwin

September 2, 2019 at 7:40 PM

I dunno - both of 'yours' are great. I'm excited to find out how you do - these limericks are just so funny to me, truly funny, maybe funnier than a limerick should be. This is a very clever limerick which surprises me not. Love, CayCay

Jennifer Proxenos

September 2, 2019 at 9:18 AM

A fun and clever limerick. She took getting slimmer too much to heart, and when she looked in the mirror, she saw lucious possibilities - but it made her a sinner. Love this write. Hugs, Jennifer

Arturo Michael

September 1, 2019 at 3:13 AM

And it sounds happy too...I like it...

Connie Marcum Wong

August 31, 2019 at 12:19 AM

I loved your funny ending Andrea! I wish I could write funny...never happen! xxoo

Lindsay Laurie

August 30, 2019 at 8:28 PM

G'day Andrea … must be better than ice cream - enjoyed - Lindsay

Robert Johnson

August 30, 2019 at 8:27 PM

Not luscious winner. Luscious sinner. :) Well, maybe both. :) lol Leslie needs to find out how Sue lost her weight. :) I guess I could have passed on the turnovers and donuts on sale. :/ :)

John Gondolf

August 30, 2019 at 7:54 PM

A luscious limerick, Andrea. Enjoyed the chuckle. John

Pashang Salehi

August 30, 2019 at 1:10 AM

Cute, very cute...

Ann Foster

August 29, 2019 at 10:44 PM

Okay, funny. When I first read it, I thought it said, desert girl. I was thinking cactus and was invited to whip topping. hehe. Great read. Diets of any kind are hard. Maybe that is why I was filling the word in wrong, trying to avoid one(a diet I mean, hehe). Ann