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Dessert

The prompt :
A picture showing two old men laughing together sitting on a park bench.
 


smiles furrowing wrinkles on face  
noisy young days, slowed in pace
all leisure time, no bustle of race
surreal past, memory can't  erase.
toothless bites, no one looks after
two old friends, we share a laughter.

main course dinner, it's all over
'dessert' let's enjoy, sweet forever.



22nd April, 2019
Eve Roper sponsored 
Free verse or rhyme in its beauty contest
Picture No 2

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/26/2019 12:23:00 PM
Hello Debjani Mitra, I like your poem. So what did you have for dessert? Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 4/25/2019 11:21:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Debjani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/24/2019 3:56:00 PM
Your poem is so joyful Debjani. Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Date: 4/23/2019 7:43:00 PM
Debjani ,congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative and great imagery, Rhyme of the two old man sitting on the park bench! Hugs Eve ~`*
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