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Despondent Heart -- POTD

Each walk along the cobblestone of night
reminds me how gladness becomes gloom
a despondent lesion from a heart,
while star-beam winks without a flare.

Here trembles a skyscape in the cold
as our affection in gradual leaks drains ,
and near winter too icy lingers,
that numb senses against it endure.

Although this moment denies to grip
one dedication tainted with a stoic end
as forward crawls our harrowing rift,
where a vanished dream lies , concealed.

For with this acceptance of loss, I pause,
yet, a  graceful beat remains in frost that glows,
to triumph over reminisces stinging, 
and stumble down like passion undone.


Contest of Silent One
11/3/2020
~ one of my last poems after my absence
 from soup, 2020-24...I had to take a leave
from life , from a battered heart 
that needed change...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kapoor Avatar
May 1, 2024 at 6:15 AM
Reading your sweet poems often compel your fans and friends to think about you "where you are df . I pray that you are well dear frind whereever you may be. Love and best wishes always..... Ravindra
Ibeh Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 7:21 PM
Where are you, Nette? I pray that you're well.
Horn Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 3:12 PM
Miss you,
Enriquez Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 4:16 PM
Greetings Nette, olde friend. I know you do not respond to comments from Poetry Soup. Just thought of you today. I have not posted last year. Now I am back. Posted 2 new pieces for 2023. Come visit if you can find the time. Would love to hear from you. Happy New Year! All the best then, Leon.
Horn Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 6:55 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet.aspx?ID=33466
Horn Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 5:43 AM
Where is Nette Oncloud I wonder. She told me that her dad was a General in the Filipino armory.
Maverick Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 2:16 PM
Same as most below Nette, would be good To hear from you, do let us know.' God bless..'
Kendrick Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 5:19 AM
I went to one of my old poems and found you had commented on it. I thought I would look you up to see if you are still posting and I don't see a new one. Are you okay?
Cornish Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Same here Nette - I pray you are well!
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:29 PM
I am still wondering where you are. Please can you let us know?
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 5:48 PM
I see you were here a year ago. I got thinking about you and after reading this beautiful poem, I wondered, what has become of you, nette. Sure hope you are doing ok!! Let me know.
Ball Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Lovely Nette and very poignant piece. Filled with deep emotion. Well done. God Bless, JB
Maverick Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 1:31 PM
Well Nette, I can't mention feeling is one Thought I'm exploring, I was thinking just This morning of the pop song (slip sliding Away) and how there is often an echo found In life as I have experienced.' My thought then Going to whether the writer was old, or just Attuned to deeper happenings? Enjoyed reading your thought provoking offering '
Maverick Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 1:31 PM
Well Nette, I can't mention feeling is one Thought I'm exploring, I was thinking just This morning of the pop song (slip sliding Away) and how there is often an echo found In life as I have experienced.' My thought then Going to whether the writer was old, or just Attuned to deeper happenings? Enjoyed reading your thought provoking offering ' And I see it was Simon & garfunkel.' I would have known straight off as a teenager LOL.))
Yvonne Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 5:35 PM
Exceptional but I’ve always felt you could write in your sleep better than other poets could write fully awake. ————————————————————————————————— Just want people to know my ebook is for free on Amazon today. I’m not sure if it’s still part of the promotion one more day tomorrow. FREE GRAB IT https://www.amazon.com/Fifty-Three-Collection-Soul-Inspiring-Anthology-ebook/dp/B09BZP1K7B/ref=tmm_kin_swatch_0?_encoding=UTF8&qid=&sr=
Goff Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 5:05 AM
Hello old friend, exceptional piece as always, deep thinker, this one, with absence comes numbness, even avoidance....blessings, jmg
Daniel Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 2:18 AM
Hi Nette, hope all is well with you, sending you warm wishes and hugs:) hoping to see you soon:)
Delaney Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 2:33 AM
Hi Nette: Missing your lovely presence here on the Soup. I hope all is well. Love, SuZ
Logan Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 6:57 AM
Curiously, when you're not around, neither are quite a few others who participate in contests.
Delaney Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 6:25 PM
Hi Nette: Ths is such an emotional filled piece. The loss was palpable, also just wanted to say Hi. SuZ
Daniel Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 1:25 AM
This is a beautiful poem, Nette:) hope you are doing well, long time, no see?
Lamoureux Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 6:16 PM
A deep emotional piece. I also like your photo, it adds to the overall effect. Hugs Rick.
Onclaud Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 12:15 AM
thank you; i am honored
Carber Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 11:56 AM
A great 4th stanza!
Ball Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 3:13 AM
This is a very poignant piece Nette. Really good description and imagery. Good Stuff! Congrats. God Bless, JB
Carroll Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 7:48 PM
Nicely penned with a touch of despondency.. Well done!
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 11:37 AM
Hello Nette, this is a sad poem to me. Filled with gloom. enjoy yoir day my friend.
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