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Desperation

Crushed the soul like a rock wild desperation
Cursed lack of prospects kills my inspiration
My life is suddenly lost in a black hole
And my joy disappeared there meanly whole
 My microcosm is dying - I'll explode like a bombshell
In splendid isolation I go viciously to hell.

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Beata Agustin

April 26, 2025 at 11:02 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Hai Hon

October 25, 2020 at 1:44 PM

Hello! Thank you for your interest. So far so good, but I calmly expect many apocalyptic disasters. And already without despair, but in the hope of starting a correct struggle with sinful passions that cause despair and depression.