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Desperation

Crushed the soul like a rock wild desperation Cursed lack of prospects kills my inspiration My life is suddenly lost in a black hole And my joy disappeared there meanly whole My microcosm is dying - I'll explode like a bombshell In splendid isolation I go viciously to hell.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/26/2025 11:02:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Hai Hon

Date: 10/25/2020 1:44:00 PM

Hello! Thank you for your interest. So far so good, but I calmly expect many apocalyptic disasters. And already without despair, but in the hope of starting a correct struggle with sinful passions that cause despair and depression.

Silent One

Date: 10/25/2020 1:21:00 PM

Hey hope you are well... Not seen you post in a while..