Ralph Sergi Poet Dodoitsu

Despair-Cheer

Despair
Reflections in the mirror
a ravaged look of despair
abandoned dreams of goodness
nothing waits for you


Cheer
Some looks that appear broken
soon can be mended in time
dream on for it will happen
Despair will be cheer

Dodoitsu Doppelgänger Contest
Sponsored by Alfred Vasallo
Ralph Sergi November 15, 2015

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Arthur Vaso December 9, 2015 at 11:56 PM Beautiful, although it seems in my case the verses should be revered! :) great write. Ralph Sergi December 13, 2015 at 1:35 PM Thank you, Arthur.

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2015 at 5:25 PM Nicely done, Ralph! Ralph Sergi December 13, 2015 at 1:36 PM Hi Andrea: Thank you for your comment.

Nette Onclaud November 16, 2015 at 11:55 AM introspective, ralph... greeat job!..huggs

Ralph Sergi November 16, 2015 at 11:54 AM Mahalo, Connie: I guess you can call it a step above haiku. I use it a lot.

Connie Marcum Wong November 16, 2015 at 10:13 AM A wonderful entry for the contest Ralph. I don't remember ever trying this form before. Best of luck in the contest.

Ralph Sergi November 15, 2015 at 11:15 PM Hi SO: Thank you for your comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2015 at 1:33 PM - A little sad poem, Ralph - Well written - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ralph Sergi November 15, 2015 at 11:17 PM Hi Anne Lise : Thank you and un abrazo fuerte.