Despair of a Child

Her eyes blinking hate	
Or more like a bait 
Inferno in her breath
Like Hades without a depth
So hard she tried to keep herself from bursting

Ten fingers clenched into a fist
Hard as an iron and ready to twist
Feet stomping like a rattle 
And mind disposed to battle
“It is all your fault
So detached and you have no heart”

“I am sorry” in a most innocent voice
Said the child in who is no vice
“I did not know there would be a fire” 
All I ever wanted is to satisfy a desire
Of having my parents back in my life
All I ever wanted is an end to the strife
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Odibi Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 10:50 AM
Thanks all for your supports and comments. I'm so grateful...we are winning together!
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November 9, 2013 at 10:56 AM
nice win Kechi, xox~ LINDA
Odibi Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 10:17 AM
Thanks Linda.
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November 8, 2013 at 9:23 PM
Kechi,, CONGRATS ;) on your win... love ~SKAT~
Odibi Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 10:18 AM
Thanks Skat.
Anglesey Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 7:14 PM
Well done. Congrats on your well deserved win :)
Odibi Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 10:19 AM
Thanks Karen.
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November 8, 2013 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations Kechi xx
Odibi Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 10:44 AM
Thanks Mandy
Mehta Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 4:05 AM
Congrats on the win, Kechi
Odibi Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 10:10 AM
OH thanks so much Dr.
A   Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 10:33 AM
Kechi, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA
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October 27, 2013 at 1:16 AM
Kechi, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT <3
Odibi Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 5:04 AM
Oh thanks SKAT.
Ekechukwu Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 5:37 PM
A wonderful poem,well penned. Welcome to poetrysoup. I believe u will find here a safe haven where u can unleash ur potentials. Wishing u the best in poetry! Baron Of Ebullion
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October 1, 2013 at 7:06 PM
Kechi, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Ekechukwu Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 8:58 PM
Well rhymed,nice work my dear.Proud of u and glad we of the same stock
Odibi Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 6:29 AM
Ifeanyi thanks, I'm glad too.
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September 30, 2013 at 1:54 PM
Welcome to P-Soup, Kechi ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
Odibi Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 5:53 AM
Thanks Anne
Van Breda Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Well written, but sad poem...too much of this going on in the world as children inevitably become innocent victims.
Odibi Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 5:25 AM
Thanks Kim
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September 30, 2013 at 7:50 AM
Good morning Kechi, ,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Odibi Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 5:43 AM
I'm at home already with you Linda and thanks for stopping by.
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