Despair

All the white flowers
Painted in red greets me
I laid down in despair 
Closed my eyes forever
I smiled at my foolishness 
The words flashed in front 
I winked at the world
I wont return, your prayers
The sky turned me Blue 
Smile,  my love
I failed in thoughts
But won over my love
The nature is beautiful 
I am captivated
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Estable Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 12:08 AM
The details here lost me a bit, but the lines are very poetic. Good effort! Thanks, Luis Estable
Sebastian  Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 1:11 AM
Thank You Luis for your kind words... :)
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