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Despair

In a quiet moment of solitude I fear my life may be slipping away I watch as it ebbs on the wind Leaving this empty shell behind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/5/2011 7:14:00 PM
I love it! I feel your poem inside me working on my own creativity...well done!
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Date: 8/5/2011 3:24:00 PM
WOW! GREAT WRITE..THANKS FOR SHARING.
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Date: 8/5/2011 3:05:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write... enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 8/5/2011 3:00:00 PM
dark words. but good poetry, users tend not to read sad poems, but i feel it is the mark of a good poet to attempt such endeavours, so well written i like it
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