Despair

In a quiet moment of solitude
I fear my life may be slipping away
I watch as it ebbs on the wind
Leaving this empty shell behind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sivey Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 7:14 PM
I love it! I feel your poem inside me working on my own creativity...well done!
Sathyanarayana Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 3:24 PM
WOW! GREAT WRITE..THANKS FOR SHARING.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 3:05 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write... enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
Cooke Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 3:00 PM
dark words. but good poetry, users tend not to read sad poems, but i feel it is the mark of a good poet to attempt such endeavours, so well written i like it
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