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Desolation Bop

How vast is the mind in all it surveys? Humanity's blip can be measured in days, yet I hold hallowed my meager plight as I plummet blind through this icy night. With all prime focus centered on me as my reigning identity I quake confused by all my eyes see. Shall I be sequestered in perpetuity? My body buckles with forces profound since I find no hope to orbit around only more egos that need to be stroked waiting for my light to get revoked.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/22/2009 11:48:00 AM
LOL nawwwww you won't get revoked!!! We have to struggle and make mistakes to learn and appreciate the gift of life & the value of knowledge! Enjoyed the verse, only 1 suggestion "the" is not needed before night line 8. Light & Love
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Date: 7/17/2009 5:47:00 PM
Im going to have to think about this one for awhile. Its very well written . BG
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Date: 7/17/2009 1:33:00 PM
Great poem!:)
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Date: 7/17/2009 12:49:00 PM
interesting poem
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