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Desolation

   Dreadful forms of crisis
depressed mind with worry.
  Dark shadows of sorrow
decayed heart with despair.
        Deceitful ways of fate 
destroyed spirit with doom.
Desolation fathomed!


08/15/2016

Note : For the contest (best sad poem ever) by Laura Loo.
          *Placed Second*

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Date: 1/4/2017 3:33:00 PM
wow, another "dark" pleiades. It is great seeing these older winning poems of yours, Afzal!! Congrats.
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AFZAL NUSKER
Date: 1/4/2017 9:40:00 PM
Thank you very much for the encouragement, Andrea.
Date: 8/29/2016 10:19:00 AM
Afzal, love this pleiades...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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AFZAL NUSKER
Date: 8/29/2016 11:54:00 AM
The pleasure was truly mine to be a part of your contest. Thanks for the encouragement, Laura. Afzal :~)
Date: 8/15/2016 4:50:00 AM
Something unfathomable nicely fathomed ... enjoyed reading ...
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Date: 8/23/2016 5:18:00 PM
Agreed. W
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AFZAL NUSKER
Date: 8/15/2016 5:03:00 AM
I am glad you liked it.