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Desolation

Dreadful forms of crisis depressed mind with worry. Dark shadows of sorrow decayed heart with despair. Deceitful ways of fate destroyed spirit with doom. Desolation fathomed! 08/15/2016 Note : For the contest (best sad poem ever) by Laura Loo. *Placed Second*

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Date: 1/4/2017 3:33:00 PM
wow, another "dark" pleiades. It is great seeing these older winning poems of yours, Afzal!! Congrats.
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/4/2017 9:40:00 PM
Thank you very much for the encouragement, Andrea.
Date: 8/29/2016 10:19:00 AM
Afzal, love this pleiades...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/29/2016 11:54:00 AM
The pleasure was truly mine to be a part of your contest. Thanks for the encouragement, Laura. Afzal :~)
Date: 8/15/2016 4:50:00 AM
Something unfathomable nicely fathomed ... enjoyed reading ...
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Space Cadet
Date: 8/23/2016 5:18:00 PM
Agreed. W
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/15/2016 5:03:00 AM
I am glad you liked it.

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