Afzal Nusker Poet Verse

Desolation

Dreadful forms of crisis
depressed mind with worry.
  Dark shadows of sorrow
decayed heart with despair.
        Deceitful ways of fate 
destroyed spirit with doom.
Desolation fathomed!


08/15/2016

Note : For the contest (best sad poem ever) by Laura Loo.
          *Placed Second*

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Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2017 at 3:33 PM wow, another "dark" pleiades. It is great seeing these older winning poems of yours, Afzal!! Congrats. Afzal Nusker January 4, 2017 at 9:40 PM Thank you very much for the encouragement, Andrea.

Beautiful Scars August 29, 2016 at 10:19 AM Afzal, love this pleiades...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo Afzal Nusker August 29, 2016 at 11:54 AM The pleasure was truly mine to be a part of your contest. Thanks for the encouragement, Laura. Afzal :~)

Probir Gupta August 15, 2016 at 4:50 AM Something unfathomable nicely fathomed ... enjoyed reading ... Space Cadet August 23, 2016 at 5:18 PM Agreed. W Afzal Nusker August 15, 2016 at 5:03 AM I am glad you liked it.