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Desolation

Homeless, I hunker down next to a garbage bin. And hail morphs into rats gnawing at exposed skin. Hunger twists my stomach with pain that's hard to bear. And a putrid smell clings to the soiled rags I wear. Acid tears flow freely in my cocoon of shame. And my head is hung low in self-pity and blame. The sun abandons me to the darkness of night. And leaves me all alone, a neon sign for a light. Sleep swears it'll save me, yet often fails to come. And I'm feeling frightened, venerable and numb. (Quatrain) 3/28/2015

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Date: 3/8/2018 8:56:00 AM
A very emotive write. Another FAVE for me.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/8/2018 9:44:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate you insightful comments. Emile.
Date: 3/29/2015 2:56:00 AM
Sad and heartfelt. #7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/29/2015 9:17:00 AM
Once again Njeri, I'm in your debt. Emile.
Date: 3/28/2015 8:50:00 AM
Oh this is so sad but so good at describing the homeless,I wish I had a place where to gather all these people and give their heart a home..A fav
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/28/2015 9:22:00 AM
Thanks so much Charmaine, you have a good heart and I appreciate it. Emile.

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