Desolate

No one would understand What solitude is Or how far it goes A crowd is not company Faces are just pictures Talk is only noise Where there is no love No acceptance is felt. What should I do? Am lost in confusion! My life; a torn cloth. What mercy do I deserve? Is my heart shallow? What storms lay before me? What should I say? I already feel desolate!

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Tim Smith

Date: 3/25/2015 2:47:00 PM

Wow my friend. Don't go seeking love for it will find you. Just be receptive and don't judge...blessings Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/25/2015 1:57:00 AM

Very powerful pen, surely enjoyed reading your very intense piece, dear friend. A 7! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) D.

Njoki Njoroge
Date: 3/25/2015 7:00:00 AM

Thank you :)