Desolate

No one would understand 
What solitude is
Or how far it goes
A crowd is not company
Faces are just pictures
Talk is only noise
Where there is no love
No acceptance is felt.

What should I do?
Am lost in confusion!
My life; a torn cloth.
What mercy do I deserve?
Is my heart shallow?
What storms lay before me?
What should I say?
I already feel desolate!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 2:47 PM
Wow my friend. Don't go seeking love for it will find you. Just be receptive and don't judge...blessings Tim
Petersen Potter Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 1:57 AM
Very powerful pen, surely enjoyed reading your very intense piece, dear friend. A 7! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) D.
Njoroge Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 7:00 AM
Thank you :)
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