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Desiree Dompire

i need a friend when i have had a rough night i need a friend when i simply need a friend to go to the mall with i need a friend to joke with when i am in the cafteria at school i need a friend when i have no sholder to cry on i need a friend when my hopes are down i need a friend when i got in a fight with my mom the other night i need a friend when i breakup with my boyfriend (that has not happened yet) i need a friend when i need a refuge from an argument my mom and i had i need a friend but not just any friend i need you.

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Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/17/2009 6:23:00 AM

Beautiful...It sounds like lyric. Pls try to sing it so that you see how it ryhms...remove the brackets. It needs some splendor's depth. I wish you all the best.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/9/2009 2:19:00 PM

I love you commenting on your work! fun, fun! this is a very creative, sincere poem! love it! jmg

Dani Sousa

Date: 4/8/2009 5:36:00 AM

awwwwww. that is very cute. i love it. say, any new poems?

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/7/2009 12:32:00 PM

Compelling end, great work...Raul

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/6/2009 8:36:00 AM

Friendship is the best of our sheltering trees, may your friend ever be the angel by your side. Love.