Dani Sousa Poet Free verse

Desiree Dompire

i need a friend 
when i have had a rough night 
i need a friend
when i simply need a friend to go to the mall with
i need a friend
to joke with when i am in the cafteria at school
i need a friend
when i have no sholder to cry on
i need a friend
when my hopes are down 
i need a friend
when i got in a fight with my mom the other night
i need a friend
when i breakup with my boyfriend (that has not happened yet)
i need a friend
when i need a refuge from an argument my mom and i had
i need a friend
but not just any friend
i need you.

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Nadia Shahwan April 17, 2009 at 6:23 AM Beautiful...It sounds like lyric. Pls try to sing it so that you see how it ryhms...remove the brackets. It needs some splendor's depth. I wish you all the best.

James Marshall Goff April 9, 2009 at 2:19 PM I love you commenting on your work! fun, fun! this is a very creative, sincere poem! love it! jmg

Dani Sousa April 8, 2009 at 5:36 AM awwwwww. that is very cute. i love it. say, any new poems?

Raul Moreno April 7, 2009 at 12:32 PM Compelling end, great work...Raul

L'Nass Shango April 6, 2009 at 8:36 AM Friendship is the best of our sheltering trees, may your friend ever be the angel by your side. Love.