Desired Moment

Footprints
In grainy sand
Mute witness of the walk
Along the beach shore holding hands
In dreams










Nayda Ivette
11-5-2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

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Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 8:16 PM
this is my favorite of all that I just saw. GREAT imagery here
Negron Flores Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 8:32 PM
Thank you very much Andrea.
Lane Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 7:02 AM
Nice memory, Nayda. Well done.
Negron Flores Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 7:09 AM
Thank you very much Lin.
Squires Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 9:33 PM
Nice job...very pretty picture painted. I enjoyed your poem.
Negron Flores Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 4:45 AM
Thank you very much John.
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