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Footprints In grainy sand Mute witness of the walk Along the beach shore holding hands In dreams Nayda Ivette 11-5-2015

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Date: 11/7/2015 8:16:00 PM
this is my favorite of all that I just saw. GREAT imagery here
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Date: 11/7/2015 8:32:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea.
Date: 11/6/2015 7:02:00 AM
Nice memory, Nayda. Well done.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/6/2015 7:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Lin.
Date: 11/5/2015 9:33:00 PM
Nice job...very pretty picture painted. I enjoyed your poem.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/6/2015 4:45:00 AM
Thank you very much John.

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