Desired

Fire lies in her eyes
Stars in my seeking skies
….we’ve got tender ties
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jolo Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 10:18 PM
wow!!!solid and compact. full of wisdom.i i like its simplicity. thanks for your apprection on my poem.
Shango Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 5:25 AM
I can feel the passion of this write ... I am consumed by the tenderness of it.
Washington Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 12:57 PM
Wow for the comment on my poem The Big mistake. thank you Love this haiku very sweet
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