Desire

Sweet sensual lips
opening like rose petals
with soft moist dewdrop kisses
a glimmer of a tear
upon her cheek
wanting spiritual bonding
in mutual loving consent 
joining in oneness.

24/04/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 8:52 PM
ohhh, now this is really sweet. I LOVE it.
Ball Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 8:41 PM
Lovely. It speaks of the way most women look at the physical side of love. Too bad most men just see the wanton desire and not the spiritual bonding. However, just let her consider another man and he is sure to have the mother of all fits. lol Great job here. Beautifully described and filled with emotion. Another seven. God Bless, JB
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 1:44 PM
beautiful sensual write Phyllis:-) hugs Jan xx7
Babcock Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Thank you for your comment Jan. love phyl
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 12:58 PM
Good work. Very passionate. I am glad that I chose it to read today. SK
Babcock Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Thanks Sara nice to see your name here. Hope all is well with you and your family. love phyl
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