Desire

Kiss me before you say goodbye
 tell me all the times you've said you loved me
 I got my hair down baby, wind blowing it madly
 I feel so alive I beg you please don't leave
 we are like sweet honey, honey
 forever we were meant to be
 kiss me madly, if this is the last time
 kiss me baby with passion, let me feel your breath
 upon my lips, amidst the sadness
 for one last time, make me tingle and shiver
 hold me just till morning light
 don't leave me in this state baby I just want to play
 I beg on my knees, can't you see
 mascara running down, 
 smudge it with your hands, feel my tears, 
 baby I'm dying, kiss me give me fire
 I promise you baby your every desire..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/30/2012 5:28:00 AM
this is a wonderful poem kerry, truly heartfelt, and excellent visual aspects.. happy new year to you...
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Date: 12/26/2012 5:45:00 PM
The type of desire that is almost desperation. True desire for sure, I enjoyed the poem. I can't rate, because I've been writing myself for a very short time.
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Date: 7/29/2012 12:57:00 AM
There's love waling out that door,,,,, don't ya hate it when that happens,,,,, good write thought,,,,,, here's to you having a blessed day Kerry ;}
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Date: 7/25/2012 10:14:00 PM
Ok Kerry. This sounds more like pleading than desire. There's nothing wrong with that. This was a well written poem and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Rockman. :-)
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Date: 7/25/2012 2:46:00 AM
Ohhhh....so sweet and romantic....not goodbye.....I love you!!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/22/2012 4:43:00 PM
Desire indeed,That's a lovely and romantic story poem. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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