Desire

He looked at me, with eyes of velvet green Watching, sweating, the movement underneath Desire poured out of those eyes, those eyes of velvet green.

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Skat A

Date: 12/27/2015 1:37:00 PM

NIKITA, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE

Kash Poet

Date: 11/12/2011 11:39:00 AM

Very nice sweet verse here.But the form is not a haiku.If you click on the word HAIKU written at FORM, you can check what haiku is.....Enjoyed.....kash(kashinath karmakar)

Nikita Mitra
Date: 11/17/2011 9:48:00 AM

:) Hahahah! Thanks for the advice!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/5/2011 9:32:00 AM

Nice, poem.. Very charming,..p.d

Nikita Mitra
Date: 11/5/2011 12:42:00 PM

:) Haha. Thanks!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/5/2011 9:09:00 AM

You have written nicely your poem. Read it and loved it. Carry on ahead. Thanks, bl

Nikita Mitra
Date: 11/5/2011 12:42:00 PM

Thankyou! Thankyou for the support. :D