Nikita Mitra Poet Haiku

Desire

He looked at me, with eyes of velvet green
                                                         Watching, sweating, the movement underneath
                                          Desire poured out of those eyes, those eyes of velvet green.

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Beata Agustin September 5, 2024 at 7:52 AM I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A December 27, 2015 at 1:37 PM NIKITA, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE

Kash Poet November 12, 2011 at 11:39 AM Very nice sweet verse here.But the form is not a haiku.If you click on the word HAIKU written at FORM, you can check what haiku is.....Enjoyed.....kash(kashinath karmakar) Nikita Mitra November 17, 2011 at 9:48 AM :) Hahahah! Thanks for the advice!!

Poet Destroyer A November 5, 2011 at 9:32 AM Nice, poem.. Very charming,..p.d Nikita Mitra November 5, 2011 at 12:42 PM :) Haha. Thanks!!

Bl Devnath November 5, 2011 at 9:09 AM You have written nicely your poem. Read it and loved it. Carry on ahead. Thanks, bl Nikita Mitra November 5, 2011 at 12:42 PM Thankyou! Thankyou for the support. :D