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Desire

He looked at me, with eyes of velvet green Watching, sweating, the movement underneath Desire poured out of those eyes, those eyes of velvet green.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/5/2024 7:52:00 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/27/2015 1:37:00 PM
NIKITA, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 11/12/2011 11:39:00 AM
Very nice sweet verse here.But the form is not a haiku.If you click on the word HAIKU written at FORM, you can check what haiku is.....Enjoyed.....kash(kashinath karmakar)
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Nikita Mitra
Date: 11/17/2011 9:48:00 AM
:) Hahahah! Thanks for the advice!!
Date: 11/5/2011 9:32:00 AM
Nice, poem.. Very charming,..p.d
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Nikita Mitra
Date: 11/5/2011 12:42:00 PM
:) Haha. Thanks!!
Date: 11/5/2011 9:09:00 AM
You have written nicely your poem. Read it and loved it. Carry on ahead. Thanks, bl
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Nikita Mitra
Date: 11/5/2011 12:42:00 PM
Thankyou! Thankyou for the support. :D

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