Desire

I gaze upon your dark eyes Your voluptuous form hidden beneath fine dusky skin How I desire the taste of you on my lips I hunger for your body, yet I must wait Fifteen minutes then ping, add cheese Oh jacket potato of mine

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Summer Uchacz

Date: 10/5/2011 9:21:00 AM

Amazing poem! Truly genius! Keep writing :)

Alexis Bracken

Date: 7/1/2011 2:32:00 PM

Not what i was expecting either ....lol, but it is still a well written poem.

Chhutan Dey

Date: 6/21/2011 4:03:00 AM

dissecting yet complex write,loaded with meaning...loved it.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/20/2011 9:42:00 AM

enjoyed reading today....making me hungry.

Emma Mantle

Date: 6/20/2011 6:35:00 AM

Lol! So not what I was expecting!! Great ending. Glad I chose this to read today, I needed a chuckle, the gray weather outside was matching my mood! Best wishes Em :)