Desire

Fulfilling desire can toll A sense of relief for the soul; But death will begin With the meaning of sin: Desire that’s out of control.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hero Aka Hero-Wilson Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 9:44 PM
Such few words can say so much. I write things like this too. good write Congratulations on being featured. Rhonda Hero
Dolezal Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 10:16 PM
This is really well written! I think it would be absolutely incredible if desire wasn't repeated. Like, maybe "Longing," instead? Either way, the writer's opinion is most important, and you've done a great job on it. Good luck!
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 11:01 AM
Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Brenden. Love, Carol
Hales Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Oh so true well done you !!! Sarah x
Adeite Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Hey, this is a wonderful piece; enjoy the honor of having your poem being featured this week. Please, keep your pen alive and keep up the great work!. You are great! Love, ~Adeleke.
Fisher Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 10:46 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 8:41 PM
Perfect limerick meter and great message. Congratulations. Andrea
Brown Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations Brenden on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 5:39 AM
Congrats, Brenden. Great write. You and yours have a great weekend. Rgds, Ralph
Freeman Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 11:11 PM
Yes, that human desire, has brought destruction upon many happy lives,Brenden. A fine presentation with your worthy poem. Thanks for your support, and congratulatios with this fine poem. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 9:19 AM
Well penned Limerick
Conway Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 8:14 AM
Very well writen!~Tirzah~
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June 23, 2010 at 7:56 AM
how true this is,,,desire is such a strong and overpowering force
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