Desire

I so want to touch you
To stroke my fingertips 
Across your skin
And feel within
The moisture on your lips
I want to ravish you

Oh longing for your eyes
Inviting me there in 
Look deep at me
Love I can see
Insatiable within
Obsession we devise

My heart misses a beat
Adrenalin injects
Each time you smile
Ease with gentle
Advance you wont reject
My lips approach discreet

And extacy begin’s
Of thoughts caressing you
I want you now
I will somehow
On pleasing love so true
Atone here for my sin’s

I so want to touch you
And mark our love so true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Funk Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 5:24 PM
enjoyed it, good job. shay
Freeman Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 6:59 PM
Awesome romantic write David, Good job, Agape, Moses
A  Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 11:10 AM
I love the passion you have in your poem....Enjoyed reading your poem today...
Cheeseman Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 10:41 AM
Loved this David rich and romantic deserves all the plaudits , thanks for your support Daniel
Strand Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 8:09 AM
A romantic write David.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments.
Pickett Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 6:24 AM
Wow David... This is filled with romance... Good work....:JP]
Sweetheart Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 6:15 AM
Now I am on fire with desire.. lovely passionate and romantic poetry so early for me to read David but its a great "jump starter" to my day.. your comment was so COOL .. thankxxx ..glad u enjoy my poetry as much as I do yours.. just posted a new blog about my son if u care to comment..luv. "Sweetheart".. running for water to cool off.....haha..
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 5:32 AM
Great romantic and passionate write. Keep the creative asnd romantic pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem " Full Moon Rising".. It was a beautiful moon last night. Glad that you got to view it also. Sara
Knop Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 3:31 AM
Hi David, seems you are really in love, well written, keep your pen flowing..Gert
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