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Desire

I so want to touch you To stroke my fingertips Across your skin And feel within The moisture on your lips I want to ravish you Oh longing for your eyes Inviting me there in Look deep at me Love I can see Insatiable within Obsession we devise My heart misses a beat Adrenalin injects Each time you smile Ease with gentle Advance you wont reject My lips approach discreet And extacy begin’s Of thoughts caressing you I want you now I will somehow On pleasing love so true Atone here for my sin’s I so want to touch you And mark our love so true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/30/2010 5:24:00 PM
enjoyed it, good job. shay
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Date: 3/3/2010 6:59:00 PM
Awesome romantic write David, Good job, Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/1/2010 11:10:00 AM
I love the passion you have in your poem....Enjoyed reading your poem today...
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Date: 3/1/2010 10:41:00 AM
Loved this David rich and romantic deserves all the plaudits , thanks for your support Daniel
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Date: 3/1/2010 8:09:00 AM
A romantic write David.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments.
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:24:00 AM
Wow David... This is filled with romance... Good work....:JP]
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:15:00 AM
Now I am on fire with desire.. lovely passionate and romantic poetry so early for me to read David but its a great "jump starter" to my day.. your comment was so COOL .. thankxxx ..glad u enjoy my poetry as much as I do yours.. just posted a new blog about my son if u care to comment..luv. "Sweetheart".. running for water to cool off.....haha..
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:32:00 AM
Great romantic and passionate write. Keep the creative asnd romantic pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem " Full Moon Rising".. It was a beautiful moon last night. Glad that you got to view it also. Sara
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Date: 3/1/2010 3:31:00 AM
Hi David, seems you are really in love, well written, keep your pen flowing..Gert
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