Desire

Standing in the corner, face hid.
 Edging in for a closer glance is what she did.
Strong cheek bones, dark hollow eyes.
 There is an attraction to him, she can not deny.

A hint of a smile, with white perfect teeth.
 A possibility of danger lurks underneath.
It's part of the attraction, a part of the pull.
 The wanting and emotions make her feel full. 

Just a few more steps to close that space.
 Just a few more steps, and they'll be face to face.
Is his heart pounding, does he share her fears?
 Can he feel the blood rushing in his ears?

How can he look so calm, while inside she's dying?
 Perhaps, his outward appearance is lying.
Can she really feel so strong, so soon?
 It's exciting to know the impending doom.

Will his strong arms hold her safe and secure?
 Is she strong enough for all she'll endure?
She knows this will not be an easy task.
 A knot in her stomach, for the favor she must ask.

With nothing between them, except tension and air,
 she looks into his eyes and is full of despair.
She moves her hair and leans her head to the side, 
 and asks "What was it like, the night that you died?"
 
"Make me immortal, like you, so i can walk the Earth,
 I don't share the feeling of it being a curse."
His smile falters and he slowly shakes his head.
 "I can't have it on my conscience for you to be dead."

She begs and pleads for him to take her away.
 She doesn't think she can live this life another day.
He adds "Don't ask that of me, it doesn't feel right."
 She leans in closer and whispers, "Please, just bite."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Be the first to comment on this poem. Encourage this poet.

Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter