designing holy spaces

GOLD WINNER POEM: Allpoetry July 26
Prompt: Unveil poetic voyage upon walks nude in branches of woodland. 
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I hear Moon swinging in Sky
as skin connects with leaf veins
drinking nectar from wood anemone 
Great Mother Goddess booms
down onto squirrelled oak
soft bursting breasts baiting

filled with devotion, crimson veracity 
She swirling devours corruption 
red campion with foxgloves juicy 
my arthritic joints open to west wind
Her fat hands bloom blue daisies 
squirting mauve milk into dusty psyche 

struggling with fear unclothed cleaving 
these knees ache to leap in faith
dissolve with Her liquid eyes
into amber leaking droplets dying 
my arc a bark of passionate light 
sweat, scars, memory mingling 
with red ants into orange earth
pondering 

pores exude stagnant ignorance 
as I cadence move deeper into 
unknown depths of woodland 
where elevated elves await around 
sanguine smooth purple pond 
dragonflied 

alongside Great Mother I scale 
walls of Power, seeking mysteries 
to sprinkle into pink womb 
eternally loved —
dried galerina crackle beneath soles
as soul soars a poetic voyage
where the poor fall pollen grains 

remembering a white linen skirt
covered groin as I scrubbed 
monastery floors where now my
raw toes eat dewdrops glimmering 
scriptures unsung —
derobed as trunks of sycamores 
I see my digits become 
artefacts 

so my mocha stained belly 
absorbs Great Mother’s 
clarity ~ together our luminosity 
design holy spaces in a ferny 
forest sharing skills 
climbing crepe myrtle 
ecstasies —

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Goff Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 10:44 PM
Exciting read Ghairo! never read such stunning emotional movement
Daniels Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 12:59 AM
ThkU for read & comment, James. Have a good weekend.
Hind Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 5:39 PM
this is beautiful and earthy, I will have to return to reread this again- to fully appreciate
Hind Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 6:20 PM
read this again, I love the monastery references, I don't know everything you are writing of, but that's the beautiful mystery
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