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Deserted

breeze ruffles old curtains of empty room ... bleak once a home empty now unemployment's curse
~~~ ~~~ ~~~ ~~~ for Nette's 'Turn on the Lanterne' contest by Francine Roberts 05/09/2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/1/2012 12:36:00 AM
I missed this contest. Congratulations on your win with your fine entry. This is a great example of a lanterne poem.
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Date: 9/10/2011 4:05:00 PM
Creative winning work..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 9/9/2011 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win!!!!!!!!----Lori
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Date: 9/8/2011 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Francine
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Date: 9/8/2011 4:04:00 PM
Congrats Francine on your 4th place win with this awesome Lanterne my friend..luv..
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Date: 9/8/2011 1:58:00 PM
Congrarulations Francine on your win!Very nice!
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Date: 9/8/2011 10:50:00 AM
This I really liked. Great write Francine and congratulations
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:45:00 AM
francine dear..congrats on your glowing win in my contest.. check the blog! …so proud of you..huggs!
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Turn On The Lanterne" contest Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2011 4:55:00 AM
Francine, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/6/2011 4:47:00 PM
Everyone seems to see a vacant house but the stories are all different. Lost jobs everywhere...Good job! Good luck in the "TURN ON THE LANTERNE” poetry contest as nette judges. CR
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Date: 9/6/2011 11:01:00 AM
This is a great entry also Francine...Good luck in the contest and thanks for the nice comments...Marty
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Date: 9/6/2011 3:10:00 AM
i agree with you,unemployment is really a curse. lovely piece and best of luck in the contest.
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