Deserted

In the midst of a forty-five degree silicate sea
Winds carry arid mists
Blinding unprotected eyes
Burying the unsuspecting
Hard waves break on the dunes
Precipitating salty tears with cruel irony
Feet, firmly rooted
Skin, steadfast in the unrelenting midday sun
Arms, outstretched
Right hand, due south
Fingers, arrayed, elements, antennae
Left balances right
Body rotates, slowly
Shoulders
Hips
Balls of the feet
Right arm sweeps the compass
Eyes, closed in concentration
West; sparks of latent inspiration
Arc from distant faulted subduction,
Eyes, open in anticipation
Convected curtains corrupt the clear air
Shimmering over a non-existent lake
Mirrored mirage
Making me shiver despite the oppressive atmosphere
Blurred images come and go
Through the poorly receptive ether
Shapes raising spirits
Smudges dashing them
Despairing grey
Mysterious black
Optimistic white
Bleached and burned
A rainbow away from the memory of hope
Monochrome dreams distilled from coalesced emotions
Abstraction dissolves to substantion
Pulse becomes sway
Refracted gamut of grey
Washes pastels over a hazy outline
Flowing cotton dress
Desire
Copper hair
Passion
Dark bright eyes
Ardour
Heart and soul on fire
Flames of wishing, wanting, needing
Lick the air in every direction
Which way to run?
There is no choice
Always towards
Always the agonizing experience
Of illusion
Not this time...
I plead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 11/14/2008 9:41:00 AM
Amazing imagery Nigel, I love the way the theme alters itself subtly toward the end... only one thing... I found it hard to keep up and though brilliantly written it perhaps could have been made more so with a few breaks, giving the reader time to pause, take in, digest and continue....
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Date: 11/14/2008 3:26:00 AM
Another passionate write, man, you must be ready to burst into flames with all the heat you exude daily! lol love Kristin
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Date: 11/13/2008 4:29:00 PM
Nigel trul captivating and full of adventure. Excellent write as always God bless you Michael
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Date: 11/13/2008 8:20:00 AM
Adventurous write. Pictures of battles with nature among swirling sands. Some lives are led that way. Exceptional! Vince
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Date: 11/13/2008 4:50:00 AM
This is a beautiful write Nigel. I once again bow to your words and the beauty of it all. This poems drips with creativity. Once again a beautiful write. Chris.
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