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Desert Sunset

Dunes Unfurl Fettered minds In gold teased hues Shadows writhe and quake As the sun rusts and wanes Dusty waltz at dusk’s invite On curves caressed by zephyred breath Silhouettes of dreams on shifting sands

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/1/2016 3:21:00 PM
Ooh, I have the shivvers after reading this. Beautiful!
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Date: 11/25/2016 11:01:00 AM
A beautiful serenade! Congratulation on your win, David!
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Date: 9/22/2014 7:33:00 AM
Ooh shadows writhe and quake, dusty waltz at dusk's invite, wonderful lines, enjoyed this entry, grats on your win;)
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Date: 9/21/2014 3:59:00 PM
wonderful imagery David many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2014 12:37:00 PM
- Congrats with the 6th place in the "DESERT" contest, David! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2014 11:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win.. A delightful read my friend..
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Date: 9/21/2014 2:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win. It's great to see this fine poem on the list.
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Date: 9/20/2014 8:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win David
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Date: 9/20/2014 3:28:00 PM
truly descriptive in fine form, mohan...proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs
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Date: 9/20/2014 5:38:00 AM
Dropping again to congratulate you, david
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Date: 9/19/2014 9:21:00 PM
hmmm,(about what you said at my poem) no, I think we are evenly matched. I had a very different message than you did. I think we both did a GREAT job!!
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Date: 9/18/2014 9:34:00 PM
wow, some of these lines really sing with unique imagery. I love the one about zephyred breath!!
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Date: 9/17/2014 10:08:00 AM
Nice etheree with nice thoughts on desert sunset, David
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