David Mohn Poet Etheree

Desert Sunset

Dunes
                       Unfurl
                 Fettered minds
              In gold teased hues
         Shadows writhe and quake
        As the sun rusts and wanes    
        Dusty waltz at dusk’s invite
 On curves caressed by zephyred breath
 Silhouettes of dreams on shifting sands

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Doug Vinson December 1, 2016 at 3:21 PM Ooh, I have the shivvers after reading this. Beautiful!

Tamal Kundu November 25, 2016 at 11:01 AM A beautiful serenade! Congratulation on your win, David!

Casarah Nance September 22, 2014 at 7:33 AM Ooh shadows writhe and quake, dusty waltz at dusk's invite, wonderful lines, enjoyed this entry, grats on your win;)

Jan Allison September 21, 2014 at 3:59 PM wonderful imagery David many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2014 at 12:37 PM - Congrats with the 6th place in the "DESERT" contest, David! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley September 21, 2014 at 11:37 AM Congrats on your win.. A delightful read my friend..

Andrea Dietrich September 21, 2014 at 2:03 AM Congrats on your win. It's great to see this fine poem on the list.

Brenda Meier-Hans September 20, 2014 at 8:01 PM Congratulations on your win David

Nette Onclaud September 20, 2014 at 3:28 PM truly descriptive in fine form, mohan...proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta September 20, 2014 at 5:38 AM Dropping again to congratulate you, david

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2014 at 9:21 PM hmmm,(about what you said at my poem) no, I think we are evenly matched. I had a very different message than you did. I think we both did a GREAT job!!

Andrea Dietrich September 18, 2014 at 9:34 PM wow, some of these lines really sing with unique imagery. I love the one about zephyred breath!!

Dr.Ram Mehta September 17, 2014 at 10:08 AM Nice etheree with nice thoughts on desert sunset, David