Susmita Das Poet Free verse

Desert Rain

On a day so dry, a maiden so forlorn
Silently whispered in the ears of dunes
That flew a million miles with breeze
Erasing the tiny footsteps unseen
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This poem is a part of my recently published book - The Solitary Verses. You are invited to read the full version of this poem:
http://www.amazon.com/Solitary-Verses-Susmita-Das-ebook/dp/B00JTD9S7U/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1398178880&sr=1-1&keywords=the+solitary+verses

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Beata Agustin August 5, 2024 at 7:06 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 20, 2016 at 11:47 PM das, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A December 22, 2015 at 7:18 PM SUSMITA :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~ Susmita Das January 31, 2016 at 8:05 PM Hello Skat :) Wish you a very happy New Year. I have been away for quite some time now. Hope you are doing great. Sue

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen April 23, 2014 at 7:43 AM A good throw! Susmita Das April 24, 2014 at 11:35 PM Thank you :)

Debbie Guzzi April 22, 2014 at 11:22 AM Thank you Sue keep up the good work. Light & Love Susmita Das April 22, 2014 at 11:35 AM Thank you Debbie :)