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Desert Place

Desert Place Oh! I thirst! I can not Even form spit! The sun is a flame On my skin of leather! Hunger burns within me! My bones are dried up And bear no joy... No water... I thirst... Oh... deborah burch©06.03.17

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Al Juman

Date: 7/10/2018 9:45:00 PM

Excellent write my dear

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 11/19/2017 9:59:00 AM

A very beautiful written poem, tou ve explained your situation really beautifully and I guess that you either became active on ps after a long while or you was never online when I was because I believe that I m seeing you online for second time in my last six months of ps

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/18/2017 8:37:00 AM

Cap'n — glad to see a post from your house. Stunning. Do I remember this one from a past time or am I just remembering how much I like you poetry? Doesn't matter — to my faves. Cheerduckin's ~ john

Deborah Burch
Date: 11/18/2017 5:30:00 PM

Lol!! :) no darlin... you just like my work!! Lol!! Big Hugggs and giggles!! Cap'n