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Desert Paint

The two-lane road stretches
through a shimmering glaze
to the horizon, passing
smokestacks of mesas spewing
clay and maize in vaporous mass.

I hear the sibylline whisper of rain 
through emerald brush
and serpentine hiss
of slithering sand.
The acrid smell permeates
evergreen and purple sage,
carries the aroma
with fine dust.

I point my thumb west,
a prayer for a willing traveler
to whisk me away 
from the cumulative downpour
when the desert paint 
floods umber in the gullies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lawless Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 6:56 AM
Thanks for picking up this poetic hitch hiker along that two lane. Beautifully done....imagery, mystery, and color left to the readers imaginative excesses. Thanks for entering the contest
Breidenthal Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 4:42 AM
First of all, awesome photo. And all in all (lol), great great great poem! =) -JWE
Cozart Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Thanks very much for all your kind comments, JWE!
Gentry Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 8:59 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your colorful imagery is astounding!
Cozart Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 9:03 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Sedona immediately came to my mind and made me smile with your well-penned poem, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 11:32 AM
Thanks so much, Caren.
Krampe Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Your poem paints a vivid desert image - congrats on your win, Dale. I love the desert with its rocks, smells and hues; it's a very special place. Too bad I won't get to go this year.
Cozart Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Aw, thanks, Agnes.
Gauthier Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 12:08 PM
Exquisitely penned, Dale. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal.
Cozart Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 12:18 PM
Thanks so much, Line!
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 6:42 PM
thanks for my contest win!
Cozart Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:20 PM
You are very welcome!
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 6:42 PM
Amazing imagery as always, Dale. What a cool image of the "thumb west" as a prayer!!
Cozart Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:20 PM
Thanks you, Andrea.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 5:34 PM
The Sedona area is just breathtaking Dale as is this poem that extols its colors and majesty. Gorgeous! : )
Cozart Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 5:39 PM
Thanks so much, Connie.
Man Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 10:07 PM
Hi Dale.. Tonight, the mountain sky is clear. In a few hours the stars will tease me with their winks. The twilight is for your poem, and it's as enjoyable as the coming sunset!
Cozart Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 8:12 AM
Thank you, sir.
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 3:42 PM
gorgeous Dale, your exquisite use of colour never ceases to amaze me:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 4:29 PM
Aw, thanks so much, Jan.
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