Desert Blindness

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sand blistering hot throat parched I need water ah an oasis where could it have went it just upped and disappeared it was a mirage

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/27/2025 4:25:00 PM

when we lived in El Paso and ran in the desert, I wondered if I'd see a mirage. A nice set of Senyrus, hubby, hugs, me

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 7/27/2025 11:35:00 AM

Mirage is not green!

Bill Baker
Date: 7/27/2025 12:57:00 PM

:-) I've never seen one, the picture is just free pic on the internet. Thanks for the heads up, my friend. Bill