Descriptions In a Leaf

Descriptions in a Leaf An ever expanding moment Deciphering equilibrium Encrypting chaos Convergence spilling outward Breathing indrawn gasp wave staccato’s The designs intricacies Pandemonium of links Events Patterns cast on scenic sentience Picks out the radiance atonement Perception floating Anchoring on that moment Refracts the clues resonance On an equal curve Spiraled inward In countless deliveries Of green Imparted memories Veined in the dissection Of atomic anatomy Splitting sun solar systems Initiating The retinal collisions Of sight defined edges Blades poised Suffuses viridian Hangs there connected Descriptions in a leaf

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Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/9/2009 7:58:00 PM

And I just thought they were pretty.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2009 3:44:00 PM

Wow, what an adventure it is to see nature through your eyes! Such a lively meter and excellent vision in this work, Colin!

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/9/2009 2:04:00 PM

Yikes Colin. Want to share some of that inspiration that keeps your outrageous poetry flowing like a dam bursting forth? Descriptions in a leaf? I am mostly in awe, slightly worried you are being possessed by several poetic masters from the past. What you see, feel, know and how you write it is, well it's just plain scary. Scary good of course. I'm afraid to read your other one. Oh yeah, amazing poem. Love, Shar