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The lady with those eyes of green Just to look at her one would know That she was not really mean Somehow when those eyes pierced The distance between two One knew, just knew She had looked into your soul Decerning your heart thoughts untold Able to divide the soul and spirit When she spoke her words were gold One would not even know that they had been told Until several days later searing flame would grow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/16/2009 1:46:00 PM
Kool poem Sara, you have the Soupers thinking>>James
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Date: 9/14/2009 4:15:00 PM
are you doing a self portrait? nicely done!
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Date: 9/14/2009 1:28:00 PM
i didn't know you were this intresting. and the event adds some intrigue as if we may someday know the story. "Dimwit Poet Contest"? wow you really too the ball and ran with it. funny how God is; i had no clue you lost your real middle name. jhl
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Date: 9/14/2009 12:56:00 PM
Can't help ut wonder who this lady is and why she felt compelled to change her name. A very provocative write, Sara! Several days after my birth certificate was issued, my parents changed my name. They wanted to name me after a "Southern" state and originally chose "Marilyn" after Maryland. Then they decided to head further south to the Carolinas and changed the certificate to read Carolyn. Either would have been fine with me. Great poem, Sara! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/14/2009 11:46:00 AM
Kool poem Sara, thank you for sharing>>James
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Date: 9/14/2009 11:01:00 AM
O Sara I guess you will not be a Sara Lee Kendrick then. I tried. LOve, Carol
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