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Describe Me

~Describe Me ~

                   Are you ready to describe your now?
                                       Wandering.
                   Are you ready to describe what now? 
                                       Wishing.
                   Are you ready to describe for what?                           
                                       Wisdom.
                   Are you ready to describe what you want?
                                       Wealth.
                   Are you ready to describe from where?
                                       Working.
                           
                      Are you ready to describe who are you?
                                          Mysterious.
                     Are you ready to describe what afterwards?
                                           Migrate.
                          Are you ready to describe where?
                                           Midway.
                         Are you ready to describe when?
                                           Monitoring.
                        Are you ready to describe your waiting?
                                           Any Moment.
Therese Bacha
5/7/2013

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Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/18/2013 8:17:00 AM This is very nice Terry. Take care. Lucilla Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 5/5/2013 12:31:00 PM nicely penned Terry. a creative write...best wishes Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/5/2013 3:18:00 PM Hi Joseph, so nice of you to pass by. Thank you. Terry xo

Richard D Seal Date: 5/4/2013 6:46:00 PM Very interesting form your doing here Therese. I guess we all wonder where our destiny lies, thoughtful write. Take care, Richard Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/4/2013 8:42:00 PM Thank you so much, its nice of you to pass by. Terry xoxo

Carol Eastman Date: 5/4/2013 11:30:00 AM Very thought provoking. Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/4/2013 11:52:00 AM Thank you so much for passing by. Terry xo

Christine Phillips Date: 5/3/2013 9:10:00 PM nice thought provoking piece that speak in many dimention. Questions are being asked in the second person which ofcourse helps readers who are not sure of their destiny...to stop and reflect for a while. Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/3/2013 9:54:00 PM I loved the way you described my poem, and happy you liked it, because this kind of poem was my first, usually i feel better writing long poems to express myself more. Thank you. Love Terry xoxo

Carl Fraser Date: 5/3/2013 8:43:00 PM Love the structure of this and the message, left to ponder, very nicely done, blessings, Carl Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/3/2013 8:59:00 PM Hello, i am so happy to get a beautiful compliment from you, as we just met. Thank you so much. Have a great weekend. Terry xo

Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/3/2013 6:23:00 PM A deep write! Thanks so much for stopping by my verses. Light & Love Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/3/2013 6:44:00 PM Hi Debbie, Thank you, nice to see you. Love Terry xoox

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/2/2013 5:15:00 PM I love your poem Terry, it's amazing...LINDA Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/2/2013 5:19:00 PM Hello Linda, thank yo so much as i needed someone like you also to tell me if it was nice, as for me it is the first time. Love Terry xoxo

Debbie Duncan Date: 5/2/2013 4:17:00 PM amazing the way you wrote this;} <3 Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/2/2013 5:18:00 PM Hi Debbie, i have been trying to change and i feel it is not bad at all. How are u? good?. Love Terry xoxo

Sukmawati Komala Date: 4/29/2013 10:25:00 AM Amazing write dearest Terry <3 enjoyed your sharing so much <3 Sk Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 4/29/2013 12:04:00 PM Hi SK, thank yo so much. have a great day.Love Terry

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/28/2013 3:05:00 PM Interesting work..Enjoyed reading your questions...Sara Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 4/29/2013 12:04:00 PM Hi Sara, Thank you so much i was waiting for you to pass by and give me your opinion because i wanted to change to small poems for a while. Have a great day. Love Terry

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/28/2013 1:49:00 AM and I forgot to mention. I found this style of writing very enjoyable to read. The formatting is GREAT. Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 4/28/2013 7:47:00 AM Thanks Andrea, i am trying. Love Terry xoxoox

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/28/2013 1:48:00 AM Hi, Terry. Haven't talked to you lately. JOe's computer got a virus and we found out the whole thing was ruined and had to get a brand new one. When it rains , it pours. AS they say! How was your Saturday, lovely lady? Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 4/28/2013 7:48:00 AM So sorry to hear that, what a pain. I am fine will write. Love Terry xoxoox

Eileen Manassian Date: 4/27/2013 8:59:00 PM A very interesting write, Therese. I loved the last two lines. Hope all is well. Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 4/27/2013 9:03:00 PM Hi Eileen, when you pass by I straight away feel Beirut again. Thank you so much I am trying to change a little bit my style sometimes. Hope you are better. Take care Love Terry xoxo

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 4/26/2013 9:26:00 PM This is a good write. My destiny I wish I knew, but I really don't know. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 4/26/2013 9:34:00 PM Hi Lucy, I don't know what happened, sorry about that, thank you so much,hope you are not too tired. Today I was in bed. See you, have a great weekend. Love Terry xoxo Therese Bacha Date: 4/26/2013 9:30:00 PM Russell, I always depended on my sixth sense, I felt from the beginning, you were going to encourage me to become better because I trusted your sharing. Thank you so much, our friendship is important to me. What is happening about your posting poetry ? sorry to ask, we will miss you. Have a great weekend. Love Terry xoxo

Russell Sivey Date: 4/26/2013 9:06:00 PM This is quite the intriguing and special write my friend! You have inspired me to write on several lines of this poem! I don't know what I'll exactly will write, but it will come from this piece, I'll try and let everyone know about it when I post it! It probably won't be posted onto the site for about a month though...I'm back logged with my poetry until that time! Whatever I write now won't be posted until about a month! This is an awesome poem Therese, Thanks for sharing! Great Work!! Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 4/26/2013 9:31:00 PM Russell, I always depended on my sixth sense, I felt from the beginning, you were going to encourage me to become better because I trusted your sharing. Thank you so much, our friendship is important to me. What is happening about your posting poetry ? sorry to ask, we will miss you. Have a great weekend. Love Terry xoxo