Describe Me

~Describe Me ~

                   Are you ready to describe your now?
                                       Wandering.
                   Are you ready to describe what now? 
                                       Wishing.
                   Are you ready to describe for what?                           
                                       Wisdom.
                   Are you ready to describe what you want?
                                       Wealth.
                   Are you ready to describe from where?
                                       Working.
                           
                      Are you ready to describe who are you?
                                          Mysterious.
                     Are you ready to describe what afterwards?
                                           Migrate.
                          Are you ready to describe where?
                                           Midway.
                         Are you ready to describe when?
                                           Monitoring.
                        Are you ready to describe your waiting?
                                           Any Moment.
Therese Bacha
5/7/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Carrillo Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 8:17 AM
This is very nice Terry. Take care. Lucilla
May Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 12:31 PM
nicely penned Terry. a creative write...best wishes
Bacha Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 3:18 PM
Hi Joseph, so nice of you to pass by. Thank you. Terry xo
Seal Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 6:46 PM
Very interesting form your doing here Therese. I guess we all wonder where our destiny lies, thoughtful write. Take care, Richard
Bacha Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 8:42 PM
Thank you so much, its nice of you to pass by. Terry xoxo
Eastman Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 11:30 AM
Very thought provoking.
Bacha Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 11:52 AM
Thank you so much for passing by. Terry xo
Phillips Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 9:10 PM
nice thought provoking piece that speak in many dimention. Questions are being asked in the second person which ofcourse helps readers who are not sure of their destiny...to stop and reflect for a while.
Bacha Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 9:54 PM
I loved the way you described my poem, and happy you liked it, because this kind of poem was my first, usually i feel better writing long poems to express myself more. Thank you. Love Terry xoxo
Fraser Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 8:43 PM
Love the structure of this and the message, left to ponder, very nicely done, blessings, Carl
Bacha Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 8:59 PM
Hello, i am so happy to get a beautiful compliment from you, as we just met. Thank you so much. Have a great weekend. Terry xo
Guzzi Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 6:23 PM
A deep write! Thanks so much for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
Bacha Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 6:44 PM
Hi Debbie, Thank you, nice to see you. Love Terry xoox
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May 2, 2013 at 5:15 PM
I love your poem Terry, it's amazing...LINDA
Bacha Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 5:19 PM
Hello Linda, thank yo so much as i needed someone like you also to tell me if it was nice, as for me it is the first time. Love Terry xoxo
Duncan Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 4:17 PM
amazing the way you wrote this;} <3
Bacha Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 5:18 PM
Hi Debbie, i have been trying to change and i feel it is not bad at all. How are u? good?. Love Terry xoxo
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April 29, 2013 at 10:25 AM
Amazing write dearest Terry <3 enjoyed your sharing so much <3 Sk
Bacha Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 12:04 PM
Hi SK, thank yo so much. have a great day.Love Terry
Kendrick Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 3:05 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading your questions...Sara
Bacha Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 12:04 PM
Hi Sara, Thank you so much i was waiting for you to pass by and give me your opinion because i wanted to change to small poems for a while. Have a great day. Love Terry
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April 28, 2013 at 1:49 AM
and I forgot to mention. I found this style of writing very enjoyable to read. The formatting is GREAT.
Bacha Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 7:47 AM
Thanks Andrea, i am trying. Love Terry xoxoox
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April 28, 2013 at 1:48 AM
Hi, Terry. Haven't talked to you lately. JOe's computer got a virus and we found out the whole thing was ruined and had to get a brand new one. When it rains , it pours. AS they say! How was your Saturday, lovely lady?
Bacha Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 7:48 AM
So sorry to hear that, what a pain. I am fine will write. Love Terry xoxoox
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April 27, 2013 at 8:59 PM
A very interesting write, Therese. I loved the last two lines. Hope all is well.
Bacha Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 9:03 PM
Hi Eileen, when you pass by I straight away feel Beirut again. Thank you so much I am trying to change a little bit my style sometimes. Hope you are better. Take care Love Terry xoxo
Carrillo Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 9:26 PM
This is a good write. My destiny I wish I knew, but I really don't know. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
Bacha Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 9:34 PM
Hi Lucy, I don't know what happened, sorry about that, thank you so much,hope you are not too tired. Today I was in bed. See you, have a great weekend. Love Terry xoxo
Bacha Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 9:30 PM
Russell, I always depended on my sixth sense, I felt from the beginning, you were going to encourage me to become better because I trusted your sharing. Thank you so much, our friendship is important to me. What is happening about your posting poetry ? sorry to ask, we will miss you. Have a great weekend. Love Terry xoxo
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April 26, 2013 at 9:06 PM
This is quite the intriguing and special write my friend! You have inspired me to write on several lines of this poem! I don't know what I'll exactly will write, but it will come from this piece, I'll try and let everyone know about it when I post it! It probably won't be posted onto the site for about a month though...I'm back logged with my poetry until that time! Whatever I write now won't be posted until about a month! This is an awesome poem Therese, Thanks for sharing! Great Work!!
Bacha Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 9:31 PM
Russell, I always depended on my sixth sense, I felt from the beginning, you were going to encourage me to become better because I trusted your sharing. Thank you so much, our friendship is important to me. What is happening about your posting poetry ? sorry to ask, we will miss you. Have a great weekend. Love Terry xoxo
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