Describe A Stranger

While I stood in line
I waited my turn
To order my drink
I spoke to someone
In front of the line

It made the line pass
A stranger i spoke
Until it was my turn
To order my drink
it passed the time

She was tall and thin
Her hair was longer
She had bright blue eyes
I found her friendly
We both spoke non stop

I felt I known her 
For a very long time 
She lived in a town 
Decided to move 
She chose  the city
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Date: 4/17/2025 8:38:00 AM
Pure poetry! Love the very human connection you made with a stranger. After all, on the same line, there is avenue for meaningful communication from the get-go. Used your time very wisely. And we all benefit. Lovely read.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2025 9:54:00 AM
Hello Joe DiMino, Yes i spoke to a stranger while i was standing in line. it helped top pass the time for my turn to order coffee. Yes we all benefit. Happy Easter. My friend. /Darlene
Date: 4/11/2025 2:35:00 PM
Your poem really touched me. I love how you captured that quiet connection--like someone meaningful just drifted into your day. It felt so honest, like you came home and had to write it down before it faded. Thank you for sharing that moment--it made me smile.
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Date: 4/11/2025 3:39:00 PM
Hello Alesia Leach, I had a very interesting conversation with that stranger. i felt i have known her a whole life time. Thankyou for this wonderful comment. My friend./Darlene/
Date: 4/11/2025 12:40:00 AM
An experience, you describe so well. We all miss strangers and different of these or whatever that really. I went to New York once and for a few days and I’ve let the lead of people I didn’t know.m they offered me to stay at their apartment and not go back. It was so funny and they were a lively group.. don’t forget about the world is of friends you havent met yet, love ve you, Pangiex
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Date: 4/11/2025 9:55:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes of course I will not forget my world of friends I have met. You were very lucky to meet these people that offered you a place to stay. That was very nice of them. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx
Date: 4/6/2025 8:27:00 PM
Sometimes, methinks, people we have barely met seem like old friends...
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/7/2025 9:28:00 AM
Hello Gershon, I agree with you. Today when at the shoe store, i spoke to a woman .I felt like i have known her all my life. Have a nice day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 4/4/2025 3:03:00 PM
The city is filled with so many interesting people! Yours seems like a very pleasant exchange, Darlene. Best wishes. :)
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Date: 4/4/2025 3:13:00 PM
Hello Evelyn, Hello Evelyn, I did have a convedrsation with a stranger. i hope that one day I meet here again. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 4/4/2025 12:05:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I am always talking to people. It does make the time go faster. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away............
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Date: 4/4/2025 3:14:00 PM
Hello Paula,thank yoou for your wonde3rful comment. enjoy yoour weekend. . Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 4/3/2025 2:22:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem, though I admit I am much of a loner.
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Date: 4/3/2025 10:05:00 AM
Hello Victor, Thank you for this lovely comment. This happened to me while i stood in a long line up waiting for coffee. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 4/1/2025 7:33:00 PM
enjoyed your poem, it vehicle real sentiments, i love that have a nice day poet
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Date: 4/2/2025 9:26:00 AM
Hello Yann, Thank you for this wonderful comment. It is nice to meet you poet friend. /Darlene/
Date: 4/1/2025 5:51:00 PM
My children scold me all the time because I will start a conversation with anyone. I believe in the old saying, every stranger is just a friend you have not met.
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Date: 4/2/2025 9:29:00 AM
Hello Jerry , Every stranger is a friend, i like that. i am hoping to meet the lady again one day. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 3/31/2025 4:28:00 PM
Hello lovely Darlene :-) Very nice of both of you, good people everywhere. Have a nice day ~ AA
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Date: 4/1/2025 12:14:00 PM
Hello A.A, yes good people everywhere. yes it was very nice. Have a nice day to A.A. Blessin gs my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 3/31/2025 3:25:00 PM
sometimes we meet people who feel familiar to us and it makes it easier to talk to them freely like you did. Isn't it wonderful when that happens Darlene !
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Date: 4/1/2025 12:15:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, yes it is wonderful. i hope it happens again. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 3/31/2025 1:16:00 PM
It's often been said strangers are friends we haven't yet met. It's nice to meet a friendly person. Tom
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Date: 3/31/2025 1:52:00 PM
Hello Tom, Yes it is nice to meet a friendly person. Strangers are friends we have not yet met. i like that5 that Tom. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 3/31/2025 12:43:00 PM
I likewise spoke to a young lady, a stranger on a date. Her date was fine with the momentary chat. We were about to watch a comedian. She saw me after the show and was very nice. Bless you, Darlene!
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Date: 3/31/2025 1:54:00 PM
Hello Kim, Oh Kim, to me it sounds like you made friends with her. Bless you. /Darlene/
Date: 3/31/2025 12:40:00 PM
Sounds like the beginning of a new friendship
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Date: 3/31/2025 1:55:00 PM
Hello tom woody, yes it does. I hope to meet here again. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 3/31/2025 12:32:00 PM
Hello Darlene, this is so nice, it’s strangers who make good friends. This is a great write. Stay Blessed. Have a great day.
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Date: 3/31/2025 1:57:00 PM
Hello Zyrool, Yes Zyrool, i agree with you. Thank yuou for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
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