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Descent of the Geese

DESCENT OF THE GEESE defying levitation, they wangled wings in unison- breaking over the cresting waves as sundown beckoned loneliness war, starvation, hypocrisy, nothing of man mattered, only encumbered rest was real no expectation, no disappointments secure together, rest, assured

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Date: 8/30/2009 6:39:00 AM
Here it is Sunday and the begining of a new week is upon us. And August is leaving us way to soon. I am enjoying reading such excellent poems today and am happy to see your poetry among them Jim. May your pen forever flow. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2009 11:08:00 PM
James being a person who lives in a county that grows rice and has one of the largest bird habitats around i can truly relate to this poem - well done James - God Bless - mj
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Date: 8/29/2009 10:13:00 PM
only few on the soup can conjure up images like this .... beautiful job my friend :)
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