Descent of the Geese

DESCENT OF THE GEESE

defying levitation,
they wangled wings in unison-
breaking over the cresting waves
as sundown beckoned loneliness

war, starvation, hypocrisy, 
nothing of man mattered,
only encumbered rest was real

no expectation, no disappointments
secure together, rest, assured
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 6:39 AM
Here it is Sunday and the begining of a new week is upon us. And August is leaving us way to soon. I am enjoying reading such excellent poems today and am happy to see your poetry among them Jim. May your pen forever flow. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 11:08 PM
James being a person who lives in a county that grows rice and has one of the largest bird habitats around i can truly relate to this poem - well done James - God Bless - mj
Knox Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 10:13 PM
only few on the soup can conjure up images like this .... beautiful job my friend :)
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