Descent of Jeweled Drops

descent of jeweled drops

just now, the saline smell of sleet
crawled on our cheeks , dripped on the hands
then sprawled out unto the shoulders
of fields tingling like chimes of
outstretched fireflies  ready to swoop
and balance their fragile rafters
under garments of  balmed branches---
isles of half-sunk blooms levitate as
if their mouths have hungered for 
cups of wine, perhaps, basins of 
morning broth from weeks of flushed
heat.

there i was, drenched in the sudden
pour of wet sheet unwilling to partake of
such weepy welcome…no. take me, melt me
have me in the sun!
bit by bit,  the same chimes
fluttered on my chest hugging the transparent
trickles in a gait of conga strut ---tunes jumping
from a piano’s  kiss, couples blending
as one satin-like figurine, alleys glistening 
silver, slippery skin. 
…and for all the flavors and moist touch of this
 symphony, zeus laughed as if nothing mattered.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Austin Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 10:44 AM
Dionysus like, nette - he of the black honda jacket, of the blood red wine. Love this one. A real treat. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Brown Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on your amazing featured poem this week Nette. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 1:13 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 4:41 AM
filled with thanks for your note, jim.. you have talent and i enjoy your pieces as well.. all the best, nette
Gibbons Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 7:24 PM
Absolutely marvelous poem, smashing, I truly wish I could write like you. And thanks for your kind comments on my "Lost Love" Jim Gibbons
Onclaud Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 12:01 AM
Touched by your message, doris... is it raining there?? best to you! warmest, nette
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October 19, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Enjoyed the sensual caress, felt every stroke and glistening drop!! well written!!
Onclaud Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:19 AM
LOL, catie... i just love the soft rain! thanks..:) warmest, nette
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