descent and ascent

up and down like a jo-jo
the mind flits in opposite motions
causes doubt and delight
hardly ever rests quietly

and yet sometimes it reaches
moments of clarity
no sound disturbs its tranquility
visions fall upon an empty canvas
all senses merge into one

it is not reason nor emotion
but a meandering spirit
and when ebbs and flows
touch each other’s caress
the soul divines a powerful moon
creates a transcendental journey

thoughts are merely opinions
foisted upon us by social demand
propping up the Ego’s false needs

feelings however valuable
can be illusions
when no truth is to be had

without light there is no darkness
in symbiosis they create one
with shades of grey in between
picturesque extremes
glorious attempts of reality
breathtaking placeholders
of universal forces
that entice us to breathe in
and out of Nirvana

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Date: 12/2/2024 12:16:00 PM
Dear Kai, your poem is a beautiful expression of finding balance between the extremes. Your poetic verse is deep, rich and vibrant. Your exploration of the dual nature of descent and ascent is profound. Congratulations for your success in Seeker's contest. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
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