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Descending Faith

They say that sound can travel approximately six thousand metres per second But what is the use when I open up my mouth and let out a long scream of deep anguish and nothing but silence comes out? It has been silenced by the river of low-spirited tears My mind on the other is going a million miles an hour while I slowly start to sink to the bottom My whole body starts to feel cold and lifeless My heart...numb My mind...empty I can vaguely hear His voice pleading not to give up but I feel that I am done fighting Done with pleading Done with praying Just...done

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Date: 1/28/2025 11:10:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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Date: 4/11/2021 11:29:00 AM
Well, thinking about it in a cold grave is not the best choice ......Aloha! Rico
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