Derelict House

Children filling it
with their running to and fro-
the derelict house.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Devonshire Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 6:28 AM
Dear Vassilis, It would be difficult to keep a house in order with children "running to and fro." I enjoyed this write! Best wishes, carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 7:18 PM
OH YES, that will do it. It's nice seeing someone I have not yet visited. Let me see some more of your haiku
Bordner Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 1:02 PM
Thus life commences Vassilis. Intriguing. J.A.B.
Mehta Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 9:42 AM
Lovely allegorical write, Vassillis
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