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St Dunstan-in-the-East

Derelict Beauty

DERELICT BEAUTY Below drape of cotton clouds and sunshine, some red-purple live pendants embrace the tall breathless wall... ________________________________ Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi Contest Name: Three Line Poetry Placed 5th O.E. Guillermo 6:24 pm, March 15, 2015
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March 19, 2015 at 11:33 AM
Hi Olive, :) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((regarding the bottom reply)) Always ~LINDA~
A   Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 11:43 PM
Nice win, Olive Ole' --Lolly Linda
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 7:31 AM
thanks much Lolly Linda.. :D! hugs!!
A  Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 11:07 PM
OLIVE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your 3-line win :) ~SKAT~
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 7:37 AM
Thanks much Skat.. :)!
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 1:56 PM
yes, I remember this one. Good to see it on the winners' list. Congrats, sweetie.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 7:29 AM
thank you Andrea.. :)! weee! congrats too!
Fraser Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 1:22 PM
Many congratulations Olive on your win with this wonderful Kimo. You've captured the image wonderfully, hugs//James :) :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 7:28 AM
thanks much James.. hugs as much!
Yvonne Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 1:03 PM
Congratulations on your win. Lots Of Love Armand.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 7:23 AM
Thanks much MAurice. :)! lots of love too.. hugs!
Yvonne Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 1:02 PM
I love this picture and even more I love your words. A fav!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 7:22 AM
Thanks much Maurice.. :) I so appreciate making this a fave.. :)!
Callus Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 11:16 AM
Weeee Congratulations Olive-eloi!! Once again I see your name on the winners' list! Very much deserved! Hugs // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 7:21 AM
Thanks much Paul and I see your name too and on the top, alone!!! :D! weeee! yey!
Nunez Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 6:33 AM
Congrats Olive! Lovely...You wrote a kimo...and I'm Kim...hehe...I know, I know..I have the attacks of bacillus cornitus today...Hugs! Kim :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:52 AM
hahaha Kim. hope you be ok soon :) congratz too
Shaw Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 8:41 PM
Heavenly image and the lovliest poem. A fav for sure. Congratulations on your win, Olive! Hugs, Kimberly xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:31 AM
Thanks much Kimberly.. :)! Congratz too.. :)!
Guzzi Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 8:15 PM
Congratulations on your win. Light & Love
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:02 AM
thanks much Debbie.. :)!
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 7:12 PM
Your wondering thoughts encompass the soul of a poet and bring to life the experience for others to ponder. Emile.
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March 17, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Thank you Emile.. :) You do that too.. :)! weee!
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 6:02 PM
Divine image and wonderful write many congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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March 17, 2015 at 7:32 PM
Thanks Sweet Jan.. :)! weee! hugs bakc.. :)xx!
Callus Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 8:48 AM
This is such a derelict beauty, Olive_eloi! Out of ruins beauty emerges; three lines (and a perfect picture) which are truly inspiring. gl in the contest. Hugs // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 7:32 PM
Weee see this contests aren't just for writing.. :) I do learn a lot while writing .. :) trivias.. !!! nice! and I see you finished top like the way I see it the first time I read your entry :)!
Callus Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 12:19 PM
Yes, you are right!!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 6:13 AM
Thanks much Paul.. I appreciate your drop by.. I was doing this I made my lil research and this the one that caught my eye from among on what I've seen.. One picture even is in Malta (correct me if am wrong) that A huge Christ statue is submerged.. hugs back!
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March 15, 2015 at 6:24 PM
this one is really nice, Olive. but I'm gonna bug you again. Use "embrace" to go with pendants, not embraces. I think Debs will lke it better that way. Luv, Andrea
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 6:05 AM
Thanks much Andie.. :)! I see my mistake grammatically.. thanks much.. ;) hugs!!
A  Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 3:37 PM
Olive, pure beauty....SKAT
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 6:03 AM
thanks much Skat.. :)!
Relish Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 1:24 PM
Beautiful kimo... #7... best in the contest Olive... nad
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 6:00 AM
Thanks much nad.. :)! I appreciate you drop by.. :)!
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March 15, 2015 at 1:14 PM
Ahh! I love the thought of these wildflowers being nature's pendants! A perfect poem for Deb's contest. Always wishing you happiness and success. 7 Love, Carolyn
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 10:56 AM
thanks much Carokyn .. i appreciate your dropping by.. i loke your too..
Fraser Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 7:34 AM
Once upon a long ago said wall spoke, if it spoke now, what would it tell. Now, nature speaks with her greenery and blooms. Fine Kimo Oliz, hugs aplenty//James xx
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March 16, 2015 at 7:46 AM
Dino James, derelict is a new word for me.. :) hence, I did lil research on some that are really wow.. :) and this one of the 63 photos I ve seen that is voted historically as a beauty.. :)! the others I view are somewhat scary though.. :) thanks for liking it.. :)! //olive eloisa throwing hug from here.. :D!
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