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Derelict Beauty

forsaken beth-El
sermons echo while souls heed
spiritual light


3/14/2015

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Anne-Lise Andresen

March 19, 2015 at 12:44 PM

- Beautiful thoughts and beautiful Haiku, dear Eve! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

March 19, 2015 at 2:54 PM

Anne-Lise, thank you so for you compliment.

Mark J. Halliday

March 18, 2015 at 10:58 AM

Very good. I would put a hyphen though; beth-El. El is the Hebrew word for God.

Eve Roper

March 18, 2015 at 11:18 AM

Where were you when I needed help, thank you so much, always feel free to give me advice. Did I do it right? Blessings dear friend

Hannington Mumo

March 18, 2015 at 12:39 AM

Wonderful piece! You perhaps will teach me how to condense wild poetic ideas and emotions into just a line or two. Kudos! 7...

Eve Roper

March 18, 2015 at 7:58 AM

I do thank you for your wonderful inspiring comment. You're such a wonderful skilled poet, I wish I could write like you, it is easier for me to write small lines than poetic verses like yours. Blessings sir

Sandra Haight

March 17, 2015 at 5:47 PM

Great words of inspiration to go with that visual, Eve. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper

March 18, 2015 at 8:01 AM

Thank you, dear friend, your words of encouragement is an inspiration to keep writing. Blessings & hugs

Bl Devnath

March 16, 2015 at 4:23 PM

Nice derelict beauty of spiritual thought. Good luck in the contest, my lovely friend,bl

Eve Roper

March 16, 2015 at 5:22 PM

Thank you, B.L.Bevnath, for your kind words and the good luck. Blessings poet Bevnath.

Constance La France

March 16, 2015 at 2:36 PM

Eve, a beautiful haiku for the contest, best of luck and thank you for your thoughtful comment on my poem, I write poems . . .

Eve Roper

March 16, 2015 at 5:24 PM

You sure write poems, and amazing ones that I have read. Thank you so very much for your compliment and the good luck. Blessings dear friend

Andrea Dietrich

March 15, 2015 at 6:13 PM

Hi, Eve. Knowing Deb, you better at least make sure you are not capitalizing the lines at all. you picked a great visual to show!

Eve Roper

March 15, 2015 at 7:13 PM

Thank you, Andrea, Blessings dear friend

Jack Horne

March 15, 2015 at 4:36 PM

beautiful haiku

Eve Roper

March 16, 2015 at 5:24 PM

Thank you, Jack. Blessings

Sara Kendrick

March 15, 2015 at 2:14 PM

Interesting work..Enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for all the visits..Sara

Eve Roper

March 16, 2015 at 5:25 PM

Thank you, Sara. :) I enjoyed writing this one. The visual is very inspiring.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

March 15, 2015 at 4:11 AM

Wow a great haiku of a spiritual abandoned place that is still echoing invitations. Nice to read u again. Take care.

Eve Roper

March 16, 2015 at 5:27 PM

S.Zaynub, thank you for your outlook, you just made my day. Blessings :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

March 15, 2015 at 4:10 AM

I agree! I agree!! powerful in three lines!//olive eloisa

Eve Roper

March 16, 2015 at 5:28 PM

Thank you, Olive, your poetry is so well done and fascinating. Blessings dear friend

David Meade

March 14, 2015 at 10:18 PM

Yes, we need to hear these words . . . for in them is light for our souls. Outstanding dear Eve, 7

Eve Roper

March 14, 2015 at 10:48 PM

Thank you, David, our life is so not right without the Word. Blessings dear friend I hope you and your family are doing well. Hugs eve

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