Derailed

on a wayward train upon tracks of emotions far off hope derails in the silence of my cries his love tried to cork my tears November 24, 2019

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 12/27/2019 3:48:00 PM

Great write!! Sandra! Congrats on the win!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/27/2019 4:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Krish :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 12/9/2019 8:39:00 AM

Wow, I knew I'd see this one winning. Congrats Sandy, this was amazing

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/9/2019 12:02:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend... hugs :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/8/2019 12:06:00 PM

Metaphorically excellent, Sandra! I like how you used these prompt words. Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/8/2019 1:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Paul...it was a fun challenge :) hugs

Charles Messina

Date: 12/8/2019 9:20:00 AM

Great work, Sandra. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. Hugs Charlie

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/8/2019 1:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Charlie... :) hugs

Na Na

Date: 12/8/2019 8:25:00 AM

Congrats on your winning poem Sandra

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/8/2019 8:29:00 AM

Thank you so much Greg :) hugs

Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/26/2019 12:15:00 AM

Sweet good luck in the contest! Reads like a winner!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/30/2019 10:46:00 PM

Thank you so much Brenda :)

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 11/25/2019 4:37:00 PM

So well written. Good luck in the contest..Best wishes..Ron :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/25/2019 6:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Ron :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/25/2019 7:10:00 AM

You aced the challenge my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/25/2019 6:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay, this one took three attempts to write to get it where i wanted it... :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 11/25/2019 7:06:00 AM

Beautifully sad, five short lines overflowing with deeply felt emotions. Incredibly affecting thoughts my sweet friend. Best wishes in the contest

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/25/2019 6:20:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend... hugs :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/25/2019 12:33:00 AM

Beautifully done, Sandra. Good luck in Beth's contest!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/25/2019 6:20:00 PM

Thank you Caren hugs :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/25/2019 12:33:00 AM

Such a great write. Love it... and it's a sure winner. Love to you sweet friend,Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/25/2019 6:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Gina :) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/24/2019 10:08:00 PM

Great twist on the challenge, Sandra. Well done.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/25/2019 6:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Line :) hugs