Derailed

on a wayward train
upon tracks of emotions
far off hope derails
in the silence of my cries
his love tried to cork my tears


November 24, 2019
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Radhakrishna Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Great write!! Sandra! Congrats on the win!!
Adams Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 4:30 PM
Thank you so much Krish :) hugs
Green Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:39 AM
Wow, I knew I'd see this one winning. Congrats Sandy, this was amazing
Adams Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 12:02 PM
Thank you so much my friend... hugs :)
Callus Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 12:06 PM
Metaphorically excellent, Sandra! I like how you used these prompt words. Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul
Adams Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 1:22 PM
Thank you so much Paul...it was a fun challenge :) hugs
Messina Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 9:20 AM
Great work, Sandra. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. Hugs Charlie
Adams Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 1:22 PM
Thank you so much Charlie... :) hugs
Na Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 8:25 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Sandra
Adams Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Thank you so much Greg :) hugs
Chiri Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 12:15 AM
Sweet good luck in the contest! Reads like a winner!;)
Adams Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 10:46 PM
Thank you so much Brenda :)
Thompson Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 4:37 PM
So well written. Good luck in the contest..Best wishes..Ron :)
Adams Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:22 PM
Thank you so much Ron :)
Pandit Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 7:10 AM
You aced the challenge my friend.
Adams Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:21 PM
Thank you so much Vijay, this one took three attempts to write to get it where i wanted it... :) hugs
Green Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 7:06 AM
Beautifully sad, five short lines overflowing with deeply felt emotions. Incredibly affecting thoughts my sweet friend. Best wishes in the contest
Adams Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:20 PM
Thank you so much my friend... hugs :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 12:33 AM
Beautifully done, Sandra. Good luck in Beth's contest!
Adams Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:20 PM
Thank you Caren hugs :)
Mcintosh Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 12:33 AM
Such a great write. Love it... and it's a sure winner. Love to you sweet friend,Gina
Adams Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:19 PM
Thank you so much Gina :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 10:08 PM
Great twist on the challenge, Sandra. Well done.
Adams Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:19 PM
Thank you so much Line :) hugs
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